Script Tests

Here area a couple of quick presentations that I put together as pitches for our major project.  The first one wasn't that good as it wasn't my idea and I was going off what i could envisage from the previous days pitches.

Figure1: Start

So this story went like this. A man traveling to see his newborn son, crash lands on an unknown planet and as he comes too he flips open a holographic watch which has his wife and child in it.

Figure2: Middle

The world he lands in has different areas, beautiful forests and mountains, lakes and floating land masses.

Figure3: Middle cont.

Figure4: End

Somewhere in the middle of the story he learns that he has to become a bounty hunter to survive and earn enough moolah to get a new ship.

The second pitch that I made was much clearer and had a much better story line, though some of the characters were slightly biased.

Figure5: Start/Precursor

 This story was about a women who is a noble of standing and part of a separatist movement trying to eliminate the founders of the imperial reign.  She gave herself to science and became a human bio weapon.  Something went wrong in their plans and she had to be sealed in a stasis pod.

Figure6: Start

 She was taken away but the Imperial forces shot down the craft.  The pilot only just managing to eject her pod before impacting on a strange planet.  The pilot looks around and sees the pods direction of travel before disappearing behind some trees.  The imperials meanwhile couldn't bring their big ship down straight away so they sent in their drones to secure the pod.

Figure7: add stakes

  The pilot gathers his things and heads in the direction of the pod. As he does so he startles a dog-like beast but manages to wound it and heads into the forest

Figure8: Overcome and add more stakes

 The pilot enters a clearing and sees the drones racing towards the pod he shots them down with the limited ammo at his disposal.  As the last ones downs and crashes a huge roar echoes behind him. Fade to black.

Figure9: End/ Cliffhanger

The roar echoes through the valley and into a deep cave  Here we see the pod and a underground creature is looking at it. It wipes away the frozen crust of the glass and then suddenly the womens eyes open.

The end